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To: Wilson@gmail.com

Cc: Wendy@gmail.com

Subject: Little India Riot

  Dear Wilson,

                          How have you been studying in Los Angles? Is it awesome? Do you know that a riot happened in Singapore at Little India recently? It was horrific! I never expected something to happen like this in Singapore. It all took place after a driver whom was driving a private bus which knocked onto an Indian national Sakthivel Kumaravelu, 33, at the junction of Race Course Road and Tekka Land.

                         I wonder why would the riot start? I don't think this is necessary ! They are here to work not to create a chaos. Tourist would have a bad impression and will be afraid to visit Singapore after they had heard this news. They would think that Singapore is an unsafe place. Some of the crowd even dare to flip the police cars when they arrived! I really pity those policemen in the car. The crowd were absolutely unreasonable. Argh! I am very annoyed by this incident. 

                           Ok, I can't carry on further as I have a tuition to attend to. Hopefully this riot would not happen again to Singapore. Do write me an email when you see this. Feel free to ask me for the link if you want to see the news of the riot. 

Love,

Wendy

Friendly letter 

Address:

Block 123

Ang Mo Kio Avenue 2

#11-211

Singapore 560123 

8 February 2014

  Dear Wilson,

                          How have you been studying in Los Angles? Is it awesome? Do you know that a riot happened in Singapore at Little India recently? It was horrific! I never expected something to happen like this in Singapore. It all took place after a driver whom was driving a private bus which knocked onto an Indian national Sakthivel Kumaravelu, 33, at the junction of Race Course Road and Tekka Land.

                         I wonder why would the riot start? I don't think this is necessary ! They are here to work not to create a chaos. Tourist would have a bad impression and will be afraid to visit Singapore after they had heard this news. They would think that Singapore is an unsafe place. Some of the crowd even dare to flip the police cars when they arrived! I really pity those policemen in the car. The crowd were absolutely unreasonable. Argh! I am very annoyed by this incident. 

                           Ok, I can't carry on further as I have a tuition to attend to. Hopefully this riot would not happen again to Singapore. Do write me an email when you see this. Feel free to ask me for the link if you want to see the news of the riot. 

Love,

Wendy

Name: Ng Wendy

Class: 1E1

Draft 3: Adding Address

Address:

Block 123

Ang Mo Kio Avenue 2

#11-211

Singapore 560123 

  Dear Wilson,

                          How have you been studying in Los Angles? Is it awesome? Do you know that a riot happened in Singapore at Little India recently? It was horrific! I never expected something to happen like this in Singapore. It all took place after a driver whom was driving a private bus which knocked onto an Indian national Sakthivel Kumaravelu, 33, at the junction of Race Course Road and Tekka Land.

                         I wonder why would the riot start? I don't think this is necessary ! They are here to work not to create a chaos. Tourist would have a bad impression and will be afraid to visit Singapore after they had heard this news. They would think that Singapore is an unsafe place. Some of the crowd even dare to flip the police cars when they arrived! I really pity those policemen in the car. The crowd were absolutely unreasonable. Argh! I am very annoyed by this incident. 

                           Ok, I can't carry on further as I have a tuition to attend to. Hopefully this riot would not happen again to Singapore. Do write me an email when you see this. Feel free to ask me for the link if you want to see the news of the riot. 

Love,

Wendy

 Personal Recount On A Sad incident that happened during the long weekend

  Yay! It is Chinese New Year! My family and I can celebrate together isn't that fun? I have been waiting for this day to come as it only happen once a year. The reason why I like Chinese New Year it is because we can get to eat many kinds of tidbits, ba kwa and receive RED PACKETS! 
 
  We went to a restaurant to have our reunion dinner. Little did we know, my grandmother was not feeling well on that day. She had a diarrhea and keeps vomiting. I pity my grandmother so much. We planned to take her to the hospital after we had finished eating our dinner. We waited for a long time outside the doctor's room until we found out that she needed to be warded for some days so that they could check on her. We all nodded with agreement. The nurses then moved her to her ward and we went visiting her. 
  
  We all comforted her by saying that she will be discharge as soon as possible. My grandmother is still in her ward up till today. How I wish that she would be discharged and recover in no time.   

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Title of movie: The Karate Kid

Describe the most exciting/memorable part of the movie. Why do you like it?
Dre Parker, 12, and his mother move from Detroit to Beijing after a job transfer. Dre Parker went to a new school in Beijing and got bullied. During the attack, Mr Han, a rebellious kung fu prodigy came to Dre's aid, revealing he is a kung fu master. Dre then wanted to learn some moves from Mr Han. He agreed . I like the way how Dre put in the effort to learn from Mr Han. It was tough but he still have the patient to learn from Mr Han.
If you could rewrite one part of the movie, which part would it be and why? How would you like to rewrite it?
I couldn't bear to rewrite it as the movie is too good to do so. It is entertaining and reasonable that's why I don't want to rewrite this piece.
List 3 lessons that you have picked up from watching the movie.
Never give up on yourself.
Have faith in yourself.
Practice something that you want to succeed as it will make that something perfect. (Practice makes perfect).

Name: Ng Wendy

Class: 1E1

Draft 2: Writing Techniques 

  Dear Wilson,

                          How have you been studying in Los Angles? Is it awesome? Do you know that a riot happened in Singapore at Little India recently? It was horrific! I never expected something to happen like this in Singapore. It all took place after a driver whom was driving a private bus which knocked onto an Indian national Sakthivel Kumaravelu, 33, at the junction of Race Course Road and Tekka Land.

                         I wonder why would the riot start? I don't think this is necessary ! They are here to work not to create a chaos. Tourist would have a bad impression and will be afraid to visit Singapore after they had heard this news. They would think that Singapore is an unsafe place. Some of the crowd even dare to flip the police cars when they arrived! I really pity those policemen in the car. The crowd were absolutely unreasonable. Argh! I am very annoyed by this incident. 

                           Ok, I can't carry on further as I have a tuition to attend to. Hopefully this riot would not happen again to Singapore. Do write me an email when you see this. Feel free to ask me for the link if you want to see the news of the riot. 

Love,

Wendy